domingo, 28 de septiembre de 2008

My holidays

My holidays:
Last holidays I stay in Buenos Aires in January and I left out with my friends to the shopping or met in our houses. But in February I went to Miramar with my family. There I went to the beach during the day. At the beach I went to the sea, play with my friends or walked with them. Then, during the night, I met with my friends in the video games and we went to walk. Some nights I left out with my family or we stay at the apartment playing. I enjoyed my holidays because I was with my family and friends at the same place. I hope that this year is equal.

Galit Fridman 2ºD

1 comentario:

Myriam dijo...

Galit, you had nice holidays. Careful with some verbs in the past. Go back to the text, re read it and correct it.

Myriam