miércoles, 1 de octubre de 2008

mi last holidays

in mi last holidays i traveled to mar del plata.
I stayed in a hotel.I played football in the beach,I went to the cinema with friends and between in the sea.
when i came back I slept very much and i went to the camp of mi school.

joan rotbard 2ºj

1 comentario:

Myriam dijo...

Joan, I liked your txt.
Good use of the Past. Remember to check capital letters for names and pronoum I. Thanks
Myriam